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發表於 2009-6-9 15:39:21 |只看該作者 |倒序瀏覽

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Good morning , teacher . Today , i want to tell you about my favourite shopping centre.
My favourite shopping centre is SOGO. I always go to there with my classmates .
We will by bus go to there . There are many toy shops . The toy is very special .
So i like go there.

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P.S我proof reading 好差嫁,,唔知岩唔岩Y^Y

We will by bus go to there .錯左...-0-
We will go there by bus.
The toy is very special .So i like go there.都好似錯...
The toys are very special.So, I like to go there.

仲有...篇野好似太短啦= =(其實要講幾耐?)

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